Really interesting! I like the tone of your guitars, loads of mid and low end tone! I hate the squeally treble on most of peoples mixes, but this one was one I actually really really liked! rightt around 0:50 was when it got good :P It's a really interesting mix! I like it If you ever finish it and throw it on iTunes I might even buy it :P

Hey... check mine out? Its an instrumental, with 3 choruses. Theres distorted guitar in all 3 choruses, distorted rhythm in the last 2, and then the last one has a solo too :P

I gotta agree and say the tones were very nice. You've got yourself a nice mind for music and I definitely encourage you to keep going. Dont slouch, get an album out. ALWAYS finishin your work, dont leave bits laying about. You have the quality, just not the quantity.

Don't tell me what can not be done

Don't tell me what can be done, either.

I love you all no matter what.
Right off the bat, I love the drums. Both the guitars and bass sound really good too. They all mesh together so well, it's more like a single, powerful unit. They all have very nice tones, as previously mentioned, but the best thing is that they all fit together. I love the lead playing. It's technical, but not wank-y. The phrasing is great, all licks are played very clean but still have a certain edge to them. I love it. The ending was fine, because it is just to document an idea, but everything could have ended together instead of all falling out at different fractions of a second. C4C? https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1511219