An acoustic song about a depressing girl who use to stalk me,

I wrote this song a few years ago but I've never done a decent recording of it or got any real critique so now that it's recorded can you guys take a look and tell me what you think? cheers

I've twiddled with my mic and gotten rid of that annoying popping sound present on my last video but if there are any other audio problems let me know.

Song is here: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=aqvd8-VK0DE

And of course, if you wish I shall C4C!
I prefer optimistic songs, but overall the sound was pretty good. Good mic.

My tips, as a singer, (my videos don't do me justice, believe me im not that bad) are: Open your mouth more when you sing, and really define all the consonants. Also, try to sit up straighter and push your tongue low, it will give you a fuller sound that comes from your chest rather than your nose. Cheers! Oh and crit mine? :P

Pretty good song, definitely not my cup of tea, but good. Can't really give many pointers about the vocals since I'm no singer myself, but the guitar work was spot on. Pretty good sound quality also, keep up the good work!
Hey man You have a pretty cool voice, kind of Thom Yorke-y, anyway, some tips as a singer: Project more, it sounds really restrained. It will also let you do the gravelly yell thing a lot better. It will also define the words a lot better. I like the song, it sounds like it could work well as a punk song... or something like The Smiths or idk. Anyway, it's pretty well written and you played it well ^_^ C4C? https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1512464
This is great, I think I like this even more than My Heart's Not In This, which was also a great song. Your voice is definitely unique, as well as your songs I think. I really enjoyed this one particularly, the lyrics were interesting, the chords and melodies were all nice, and it was quite catchy actually. Great stuff here man, and thanks for the crit