#2
Dude, just a heads-up, you don't have a link posted to the song. I still found it, but that would be helpful.

Loved it when the vocals kicked in. The piano intro could be cut a little. I love the subtle bass when the vocals kick in. The weird distorted bass thingy around 1:15 drowned out the vocals a little. Are you using compression on the whole track? If you are, it's a little extreme. Vocals need pushed, I can't understand a word of them. The solo was great, if a little out of tune. The idea here is freaking sweet, good luck to you both.

C4C? https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1511478
#3
Quote by BrandonBeaux
Dude, just a heads-up, you don't have a link posted to the song. I still found it, but that would be helpful.

Loved it when the vocals kicked in. The piano intro could be cut a little. I love the subtle bass when the vocals kick in. The weird distorted bass thingy around 1:15 drowned out the vocals a little. Are you using compression on the whole track? If you are, it's a little extreme. Vocals need pushed, I can't understand a word of them. The solo was great, if a little out of tune. The idea here is freaking sweet, good luck to you both.

C4C? https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1511478

I knew I forgot something, thank you for the heads up.

I'm still not great with mixing and all so I wasn't sure how to fix the vocals, but I will look into it.
Thank you very much for your critiques.

I will check yours out right away.
#4
really cool mellow song. I liked how haunting the vocals sounded. as for the rhythm guitar that came in, I would try messing around with different tones because It was really hissy and I couldn't make out what notes you were playing. the solo didn't really fit for me. it seemed a little too much for the song. I would try to simply it more and not worry about making it too fancy. eitherway its a cool song, keep up the good work.
check out mines: https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1504681