#1
This is my new song about our planet, it was meant to be longer but I sort of lost touch with the lyrics. Everything was recorded from a cheap USB mic and mixed in Krystal, so the quality isn't exactly up to studio standards.

http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/listen/466452

Any crits at all I would love to hear, also please include a link to something you'd like me to crit.

Thanks!
#2
Quote by slip777
This is my new song about our planet, it was meant to be longer but I sort of lost touch with the lyrics. Everything was recorded from a cheap USB mic and mixed in Krystal, so the quality isn't exactly up to studio standards.

http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/listen/466452

Any crits at all I would love to hear, also please include a link to something you'd like me to crit.

Thanks!

nice, I like it!
#5
The guitar work is nice. The body taps are very nice addition. I'm a sucker for whisper-y vocals, so naturally I love it. Especially because I hear a hint of Elliott Smith in there, which is always good. This could easily be longer. You had a great thing going, hearing more of it would have been nice. I'm listening to it for the second time now, and I really like the piano. I didn't notice it before. I love subtle things like that, it really adds to the track even if it's not immediately noticed. Great stuff. C4C? https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1512441
#6
Thanks for the kind words, I didn't think people would like it this much!

@rockfan Yeah you are right on that. I'm trying to acquire a good quality mic so my vocals can pop more. I have a naturally deep voice so singing in this key was hard enough

@LommiPage Thanks to your comment I'm going to finish this song as a soon as I get a new mic. Glad you like it.
#7
really nice song! your voice reminds me of Damon Albarn from gorillaz. I like the synths and effects you added in the background. I would love to see a video set to this. it would be interesting. good job!
check out mines: https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1504681