#1
Leave a crit and a link and i'll crit your work. The song is Fast done, thats not the final name but when i get some lyrics i'll rename it. Check it out and let me know what u think and what i could do to help make it better. Thanks
http://www.myspace.com/theocifers
or
http://soundcloud.com/aradkins92
My Music
http://www.myspace.com/theocifers
GUITARS:
Gibson ES-335
Gretsch Pro Jet
Guild Acoustic
1958 Harmony Hollowbody Archtop
AMPS & EFFECTS:
Vox Valvetronix AD50VT
Vox V847A Wah Pedal
Electro-Harmonix USA Big Muff
Danelectro Daddy-O
Last edited by TeXaS_db at Jan 18, 2012,
#2
Really digging the 60's garage vibe, love it! Needs vocals, though. I'm guessing the lo-fi was intentional. If it wasn't, leave it! It works perfectly. Loved that solo as well, with so much soul. The most I could ask for is better sound quality from MySpace. Keep this shit up!
#3
This is great stuff. Really. The vibe is real nice, the energy is astounding. Frenzied riffs, solid drumming, well-written song. What more can one ask for? It's getting a little repititive, but that's most likely due to the lack of vocals. This solo is NICE. The phrasing is excellent, the energy is pounding, it's all good. This is definitely a good track. With some vocals, you've got one hell of an awesome song C4C? https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1512441
#5
it could really go farther with vocals. even if you are pitchy and stuff, itll suit it, dont worry and keep making music. Add some vocals and youll be surprised at the people who will vibe with this. stay confident.


show the luv
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#6
Good old-vibe rock song. One thing i can suggest is with the drums, the snare and 7 kick sounds really low compared to the hi-hats/cymbals when other instruments are playing over. Also, at the end, right after the solo, maybe play the riff one more time to end it.
Other than that, i wouldn't change a thing. Just add some vocals to it.

C4C ?
https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1506864
#7
Afraid I haven't got much to say that aint already been said, good vibe, nice guitar work, nice drums (which work very well with the guitar). Look forward to hearing it with vocals. ooooh just got to the solo, nicely done there. Phrasing is very good and the tone is spot on. Now I REALLY want to hear it with vocals. kind of reminds me of the yardbirds,

C4C? https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?p=28935666#post28935666
#8
Grgh could you upload it somewhere else? Myspace isn't working for me (surprise surprise).
#9
Quote by rockfan7
Grgh could you upload it somewhere else? Myspace isn't working for me (surprise surprise).

Here it is on soundcloud
http://soundcloud.com/aradkins92
My Music
http://www.myspace.com/theocifers
GUITARS:
Gibson ES-335
Gretsch Pro Jet
Guild Acoustic
1958 Harmony Hollowbody Archtop
AMPS & EFFECTS:
Vox Valvetronix AD50VT
Vox V847A Wah Pedal
Electro-Harmonix USA Big Muff
Danelectro Daddy-O
Last edited by TeXaS_db at Jan 18, 2012,
#10
Nice! Sounds like it could be in a Tarrintino movie, so it's awesome. Love the vibe. Could go with some Strokes-esque vocals, that could make it really cool I think. Like kind of distorted but chill vocals, it definitely has a good structure set up. I don't know what to say, you did what you were trying to do and you did it very well. Good job.
#11
Thanks for the crit...the strokes is actually what i was going for.
My Music
http://www.myspace.com/theocifers
GUITARS:
Gibson ES-335
Gretsch Pro Jet
Guild Acoustic
1958 Harmony Hollowbody Archtop
AMPS & EFFECTS:
Vox Valvetronix AD50VT
Vox V847A Wah Pedal
Electro-Harmonix USA Big Muff
Danelectro Daddy-O