#1
This song is called the End Song (a working title). Let me know what ya think. No vocals yet. Leave a crit and link and i'll crit your work. thanks.
http://www.myspace.com/theocifers
My Music
http://www.myspace.com/theocifers
GUITARS:
Gibson ES-335
Gretsch Pro Jet
Guild Acoustic
1958 Harmony Hollowbody Archtop
AMPS & EFFECTS:
Vox Valvetronix AD50VT
Vox V847A Wah Pedal
Electro-Harmonix USA Big Muff
Danelectro Daddy-O
Last edited by TeXaS_db at Jan 17, 2012,
#2
id love to hear this with vocals, its a great tune. nothing wrong or bad about it. was kinda jamming along on my mandolin whilst listening.....dont judge me. Great Work, keep me posted when the vox are up
#4
Their real drums...thanks for the crits
My Music
http://www.myspace.com/theocifers
GUITARS:
Gibson ES-335
Gretsch Pro Jet
Guild Acoustic
1958 Harmony Hollowbody Archtop
AMPS & EFFECTS:
Vox Valvetronix AD50VT
Vox V847A Wah Pedal
Electro-Harmonix USA Big Muff
Danelectro Daddy-O
#6
I love your tones! I like how you brought the changes together, the guitars go really well. It sounds a little empty though, but the track overall keeps it together. It needs vocals as people have mentioned, it would be a track on my playlist with a few touchups.

Nice work man!

Crit mine here:

https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1512988
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#7
i loved the chill verse matched with the heavy decending chorus!! and the solo was powerful but not overpowering. also you get a A for tone. liked it alot i wanna hear the one with vocals when you get it up.

cheers
#8
I like this. Nice guitar tone, and that bass part is awesome. Good drum patterns, although I'd suggest trying to mute the snare a bit more. I like the contrast between the verse and chorus too. The high guitar chords in the second verse are brilliant. Beastly guitar solo too, love it. Structurally the whole thing's spot on. It'd be nice to hear this with vocals, or at least a melody part, but all in all it's coming along really nicely.
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#9
Really really great tone! The drums sound great, as well. I'd love to hear some vocals on top of this, it'll sound amazing. Really loved the tone on the 2nd verse chords. The solo fits in really well after the chorus, but, idk if you'd be into panning the solo, but I think it would be sweet if you did two solo tracks and just panned one on each channel. Sounds really great man!

feel free to crit any of my songs here:


https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?p=29024844#post29024844
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#10
TeXaS,
I don't like that myspace music player: it stopped in the middle of the song to see if I wanted to connect to facebook (no), and I couldn't start the song again. "End Song": everything is a bit muddy, but I like the guitar riffs, and all the playing is good. Yes, this could use some vocals. If you can get good singing on this & improve the sound quality, it could be quite good. Please review my music at this link:

https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1515043