It's good, the phrasings nice and you didn't just do some mental shredding, nice sparce use of fret tapping and of the tremelo arm and a good guitar tone.

the only problem with it is the style, it sounds to me like something bon jovi would play. Of course that's not a fault with the guitar work that's just my personal taste.

C4C? https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?p=28935666#post28935666