#2
Great sounds here, really nice high melody. It kind of feels like there are too many short build ups, I feel like if it just had one into the dubstep synth it would of been more powerful. But good job with that sound. Cool little change in pace after the build after that. One problem I'm having is you're using the same buildup over and over and over, while it does work well, I feel like if you added a little change or like made the sample after the build up a tad longer it would bring extra tension that could make it pretty cool. But I really like the voice/samples you used pretty cool. All in all it's done very well and you obviously know what you're doing. C4C? https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1512464
#3
The stand-out opportunity for me is Rockfan's comment about the build-ups. The repetition of that specific riff devalues it as the song progresses. I'd say save it up for one moment to have a huge, almighty bass drop and dub-step the hell out of it. Otherwise, I feel like the song just has minimal highs and minimal lows. The more dynamics you can create with dance, I feel the more impactful the song is. If you could, a bigger, more aggressive, thunderous bass would surely help. The intro made me think of a Sega game soundtrack, hehe. I do hear a lot of potential in what you are doing though and am interested to hear some other work! Stay solid my man.

C4c - https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1513682