#4
You've got a good voice but the guitar was way to quiet in comparison to it.
Also, the song started way too suddenly and loudly.
#5
Quote by itamar100
You've got a good voice but the guitar was way to quiet in comparison to it.
Also, the song started way too suddenly and loudly.


Ok thanks I can work with that. Thanks for the compliment on the voice!!! i Hate it! haha
#6
Yeah turn the guitar up. I like the overdubbing on the chorus. And the melody of the chorus is great. Good songwriting man and the solo fit it perfectly. U got a solid song here. And your voice is good...dont doubt yourself. Just turn the guitar up just a bit and your good. Keep it up man.
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#7
not bad, interesting photos you put together for the video. I like the solo you had at 2:00 but not soo much the effect. was it an echo or delay effect? try using reverb instead and it'll sound much better in my opinion. good job
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#8
thanks i actually just double tracked the solo and faded each take to a side i just was off a bit haha