#3
FaceFive,
Growling about ponies? That is kind of funny. Maybe growling about horses galloping into combat would be more appropriate (or perhaps that is cliche). I'm not into growling, so I won't comment on the growling vocals. Strange vocals at ~2:10 & 2:55. The guitars sound quite good! I was impressed with the guitar playing/tone/riffs. Drums are good. Please review my music at this link:

https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?p=29028425#post29028425
#4
really cool heavy riffs from the start. the bass sounded like it had a nice rattle to it which I like. I like your growls and I like the music but im not sure if they match and go with each other...maybe experiment with higher pitched growls like you did around 1:50? either way the music sounds cool.
check out mines: https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1504681
#6
i once wrote lyrics about unicorns, and the song was pure metal.. just to mention..

But about the song: this is nice & damn good. I really liked it, especially that part at ~2.00 had something über in it. Guitars were technic and well played, and catchy. Drums were usual, typical for this kind of music. Vocals in the first verse were a bit too loud or something, and it made it sound a bit weird, but there really is nothing wrong so much. It was well played, well growled and good music.

For C4C
https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1514580