#1
Hey, first post here.
This is the first sort of "song" ive recorded. Ive done some things before, just a bass line to a drum beat, but thats it. This is the first time i picked up the guitar and put that in too. Its shit, i could have done better, but i wont spend that much time making it all shiney. it doesnt serve to much purpose. Any advice would be great. I can provide more details if you want.

http://soundcloud.com/shittymusician/song-1

Thanks in advance for any advice!
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#2
Sounds good to me. Sure, the playing could be cleaner and tighter, and it was a bit repetitive, but I liked all of it, I could definitely see enjoying it as a full song. Have a bit more faith in yourself
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