#1
REDRUM pt. 2 by Destruction Dragon Deaths.

Enjoy.

Lyrics:

(Deathkiller)
Whoa-oh-oh

(Dr. Dragonmaster)
We managed to escape
the doomed construction
Tasting the fresh air
We have escape the dark cell!

The cell of destruction
The cell of dragons
The cell we were all alone in
And there was blood on the walls!

But we're not yet safe
We have yet to escape
the killer dragon master
The man is still behind us

He has loads of dragons
And he wants to kill us

Oh, damn what happened?
Are we on the run again?

Yes, we are or we'll
die from the REDRUM man!

(Deathkiller)
It has been quite a while since we last met, oh
Since we met for the first time yeah
Since you tried to kill us baby
Redrum man
Please let us leave this place
(Dr. Dragonmaster)
Please let us leave this place!

REDRUM is painted on the walls
REDRUM is grabbing ahold of my balls
REDRUM is making me shiver, oh
REDRUM is making me feel really good

(Deathkiller)
Whoa-oh-oh-oh
Whoa-oh-oh-oh!
Whoa-oh-oh-oh
Whoa-oh-oh-oh!

It has been quite a while since we last met, oh
Since we met for the first time yeah
Since you tried to kill us baby
Redrum man
Please let us leave this place

It has been quite a while since you killed me, oh
Since I tried to fight back against
Your powerful attacks, baby
Redrum man
You're way too strong for us
Attachments:
7 REDRUM pt. 2.gp5
Last edited by Radman_Paiza at Jan 29, 2012,
#2
well,let's see the intro was a little strange and in my opinion,you must to make an interlude or a break before you the hard part begins.
bar 10 - bar 34 -- it was nice,but a little boring that riffs(IMHO)
bar 34 - bar 53 -- it was great,i like that part.it sounds very groovy.and i really like this part.
bar 54 - bar 66 -- it seems a chorus,i like the oboes.maybe there are some pop-punk influences?
bar 67 - bar 77 -- the riffs were a little boring again
bar 78 - bar 87 -- nice trumpets,i enjoyed them very much
bar 88 - bar 111 -- you need an interlude or a break here before you begin this slow part.but this slow part was not bad at all.
bar 112 - bar 137 -- yeah,it seems an chorus.this time was longer,but the end is too short..
anyway, it was good. i give to you 7 from 10 . it is just my opinion,sorry if i late,man greetings and see ya soon!