#2
Intro is very nice, tone is reminiscent of Agalloch almost, like it a lot. The transition to the heavy bits is somewhere between too sudden and not sudden enough, if that makes enough sense. Basically, if its going to fade in I would say make it longer, or just give no warning and go straight into it. Tone is professional sounding, sounds good but maybe a bit plain. The acoustic had great ambiance and I would love to see that transition into the other guitar tones as well.

Drums are well done, mix is pretty much perfect for them as I hear it. I feel like its too short though, the whole song, seems over just as it is getting started - this feels like a setup to a 7 or 8 minute tune, otherwise its extremely well done.
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#3
Ok pretty picking to start! little sprinkles falling from the sky its nice, the drums could be produced better but i wont dwell on that really....though they do sorta take my attention off the music. its nice here, we are just cruisin, settin a nice little tone. OH the ride is much nicer, cute fills.

Dang, that metal riff really didnt feel like thats where we were goin, im all for surprises but I just, you had such a good thing! its a very nice riff but perhaps these are too different songs.

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yes a nice texture, would be cool with a pad underneath.


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#4
The acoustic tone at the beginning was excellent, the distortion is a little too trebly for my taste tho. I like the chorusy part at 2:50 a lot. Might need to be expanded with more layers in my opinion to keep it interesting. C4C? https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1513394
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#5
Quote by The Uncreator
Intro is very nice, tone is reminiscent of Agalloch almost, like it a lot. The transition to the heavy bits is somewhere between too sudden and not sudden enough, if that makes enough sense. Basically, if its going to fade in I would say make it longer, or just give no warning and go straight into it. Tone is professional sounding, sounds good but maybe a bit plain. The acoustic had great ambiance and I would love to see that transition into the other guitar tones as well.

Drums are well done, mix is pretty much perfect for them as I hear it. I feel like its too short though, the whole song, seems over just as it is getting started - this feels like a setup to a 7 or 8 minute tune, otherwise its extremely well done.

Thanks man, I'll probably drag out the fade in a little longer. As far as the distorted tones, I'll probably add a little reverb to add a little ambiance. By the time I'm finished with the song it'll probably be around 8 minutes