Composition is solid, after about a minute though I really would like to see drums come in to keep it more interesting. The tone is good although I think its a bit think, I do like the effects on it though. Bass line doesnt seem to vary too much so maybe a few fills to match up with your playing would make it sound even better.
Lascaille's Shroud

Progressive Cosmic Death Metal


You only exist because we allow it,
And you will end because we demand it.