I listened to the GP5 song, I really liked the chord choice and arpeggiation throughout the piece. You have a really good suspension of sound in it, and its a piece thats pleasant to listen to.

BTW, if you want more crits, you should probably C4C. I don't have the time for a full crit at the moment on this piece, but any comment is better than nothing, and this forum has been basically dead lately.

Would you mind doing a brief sentence or two on mine? Unfortunately its not as "Pleasant" as your piece was.

If you want a full crit, section by section on the GP5 Piece, you could do a thorough one on mine and I would gladly return it.