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Hey guys

Just wanna know if these lyrics i wrote are grammatically correct


This path, I walk, will get me nowhere
But I hear your voice, you tell me “Go there!”
I feel so alive when I'm dreaming
In my nightmares you don't hear me screaming
No one but me can set me free
When I'm falling down into this sea
Filled with the lies and illusions
Of my life before I was dreaming

Shadows are gone by night
I'm ready to fight
The nightmares that won't let me die
I should have known
That I'm not alone
In the darkness when sunlight is gone

Don't waste your breath talking to me
I don't hear a thing of what you say
I tell you I'm not gonna stay
So you better get out of my way
I'm lost, I don't know where I'm going
I feel the fear inside me, it's growing
This path, I walk, will get me nowhere
But I hear this voice, it tells me “Go there!”

Shadows are gone by night
I'm ready to fight
The nightmares that won't let me die
I should have known
That I'm not alone
In the darkness when sunlight is gone


cheers