#1
ok before i get started i think i should tell you what its about? i dunno i've never done this before.
basically me and my Girlfriend lost a baby about a year ago, so i wrote this song, so it has alot of meaning.

if you think its shit please tell me, if you love it tell me, but any help will be muchly appreciated.

Song: done in the key of E.

It’s been over a year since
I’ve never saw your face
And though your blood runs cold
I’ve never lost my faith

Maybe in the next life
We’ll finally meet again
But until then
I wont breath defeat

And your, where the angles fly
You’re only a stary night away
And in my dreams I can still see your face
But for me to see you, it’ll have to wait

I still lay awake at night
Dreaming of you
I wonder what your skin was like
And if you loved me to

And your, where the angles fly
You’re only a stary night away
And in my dreams I can still see your face
But for me to see you, it’ll have to wait

We reached the blackest of ends
For us my friend
Gone before your prime
Thos lies were set to hide

And your, where the angles fly
You’re only a stary night away
And in my dreams I can still see your face
But for me to see you, it’ll have to wait

But I wish we met
Just for one day
I want to know what I lost
I don’t want you to fade away

And your, where the angles fly
You’re only a stary night away
And in my dreams I can still see your face
But for me to see you, it’ll have to wait
#2
I really like this, I think a good name would be wait? I hope you do a recording of this song, it's really good
"When the power of love over comes the love of power the world will know peace."
~Jimi Hendrix
#3
Nice lyrics and I could tell that you wrote from the heart. One thing...

Not that I'm the grammar police, but you have a couple of bad mistakes. First, angel is spelled wrong. Angle refers to the number of degrees between two lines. Starry should have two Rs. A few other punctuation issues, but who cares.

I'd like to hear the recorded version of it, if you ever do it.
#4
yeah i make lots of mistakes :L silly dsylexia and yeah i've got to do the music, and it will be recorded so keep an eye out ;D