Well played i reckon you are defo getting there with this one. Theres a few little timing issues here and there but does not detract from what a great effort this was. Well done mate
Hey man that was good.
I would suggest trying to work on getting a more 'staccato' sound in the verses, because at the moment you are playing a bit too legato IMO.
You will achieve this by palm muting with the picking hand.

During the solo you lost time on a few occasions - try not to panic and rush ahead of the rest of the band when soloing - take your time.

All the notes are there and you are well on your way to producing an excellent cover so keep working hard.

You've inspired me to do a Pantera track - awesome music.

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