#1
So after being told by my bandmembers, that my songs are really lng, and that i should make a shorter one, i did just that. It wasnt suposed to be an instrumental song, but it just kinda turned out that way, tho i still plan on making lyrics for it, just to see if it will fit. Genere is hard rock or heacvy metal, i dont really know :P. Anyway, here it is:

http://soundcloud.com/gorkyporky/simplc

Constructive criticism would be greatly apreciated
Joža je kul. On ma sirove z dodatki pa hambije.
#2
damn, no replys :/ wich is wierd since i consider this to be one of the best pieces to date...
Joža je kul. On ma sirove z dodatki pa hambije.
#3
Only thing botters me is amount of gain, you need more clarity, and a little more treble for the solos. Passage between riffs bothers me too. Hmm, for me, a song which repeats itself is the same as a composition (a pharagraph) that repeats itself, you keep reading the same thing. I'd like some progress inside the song.
Last edited by cemges at Feb 4, 2012,