Made a relatively short and simple acoustic song last night and I would love some feedback.
Here is the Soundcloud link
"Herro this is City Wok, can I take your order prease?"

Nice work, I really liked the slow intro/outro part with the unusual timing Cuts off pretty brutally at the end, but I know sometimes its hard to avoid that xD
My Soundcloud
Always up for some C4C, been compared to Frank Turner, The Cure's Robert Smith and Bruce Springsteen so check out my stuff if you like the sound of that