In the interest of promoting self-humiliation I've decided to offer up another of my tunes for a blistering array of criticism.

hear hear folks!
what we have here is a the very archetype of desire.
he doesn't have to many years in; but the need is real.
he still working with elementary forms but he dose venture the occasional outside note.
it's not your typical boring shred, but I wouldn't call it bedazzling creationism either.
it's the attempt that counts sometimes in life.
for those of you who still cling to the desire to move past the pentatonic.
you would do well to support those who are like minded.