#1
Hope you guys enjoy, lemme know watcha think, and C4C

Verse1
I live, without ever feeling
Anything, that I’m sick of hearing
Are the problems that I lose too
She stands without ever kneeling
In the water, that’s forever crashing
Trying to break her down
We are, everything you came for
We run, all along the north shore
Never looking back (x2)

Chorus
We all scream out
We all dig in
We all live this lie
Because it’s convenient
Just run away with me
It’ll be everything we need
A new start together
A new you and me

Verse2
We‘ll fight, for what we stand for
We’ll fall, and push back up
Never breaking down
They’ll try, forever to catch us
They’ll only, ever catch a glimpse
Of our fading backs (x2)

Chorus

Bridge
Pick up the pace we’re going down
Lift your feet till your running on air
Not the ground
If they catch us will you ever breathe a word
Of what we are and what we’ve found
Keep your secrets till they bury us arm in arm
Letting our stories fade without a sound

Chorus
Too lazy to come up with a clever or relevant sig.
#2
Lyrics are pretty good, I'm looking forward to the melody that comes along with it.
#3
Quote by PCADriven
Are the problems that I lose too


Seems a little too confusing to read at fisrt until you re-read the line above it. Have you thought about, "Are problems that I get to lose"?

Quote by PCADriven
Never looking back (x2)


I'd try to change this line completely, as I couldn't count the times I've heard, "Never look(ing/ed) back". Sorry, but it does seem cliche. The lines above it are great though.

Quote by PCADriven
Just run away with me
It’ll be everything we need
A new start together
A new you and me


Consider revising this part especially. Make it more original and more unique to the story your writing is telling. Then it could be really good.

Good job man. (If you wanted to C4C, https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1517277)
Last edited by Myaccount876 at Feb 6, 2012,