Impressive, it's quite progressive which makes me like it even more.

What I didn't like:
-Your accent. I believe you should work on it a bit more.
-The drums don't sound that good and bring your whole sound down. I realise they're MIDI, but maybe get better software like ezDrummer.
-After the intro, it takes quite a lot of time with that 0-3-3-0-3-3-0-3-0-3-3-0-3-3-0-3 riff and it kind of gets repetitive.

Overall: needs a little work. But it's great! Nice lyrics, nice structuring and I really like what you're playing!
thank you for you comments - much appreciated!

my voice is an area I will always have to work harder on to try and bring up to the level of the guitars. Drums wise I do agree, they need to be a bit snappier, I'm going to experiment a bit more in the fun re compression for the drums to try and bring them alive!

glad you liked the "prog" vibe to the track!