#1
i kept a good pace
but i just kinda lost it
i took too much time
and now its gotten kind of pointless
things aren't the same anymore
and i don't think we're ever gonna go back

cant make up my mind
its became a bad habit
been calling into work
even though i don't feel sick
maybe i'll stay inside
maybe i'll never leave my home

forget all I've said
and forget that i'm sorry
i might have cared then
but i dont care anymore
you can keep knocking
but i'll never open the door

you could change your mind
we'll believe that everything was actually nothing the whole time
#3
Is this your first song you have written? I personally think its good man!
#4
thanks allot that means allot to me.
its not the first that I've written. but its among the few.
#5
I think this is pretty good!
Just asking, what genre of music were you thinking of it going with?
#7
thanks, i will revise=]
well i was just going to come up with a chord progression on my acoustic and take it from there.
i'm not really going for any kind of genre i just want it all to come out my way.
I've been doing this g bm f c, g bm f gm thing on my guitar.