really good actually! I think the lead guitar is to abrupt when it comes in and sounds tinny for the song. Unless that's what you want. I think the most important thing is that if it sounds good to you, do it. To me, sounds great (better than what I could record) But what do I know lol

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first 10 seconds reminds me of the intro to Survivor Guilt by Rise Against

Thought exactly the same thing !
Sounds great, although I would personally pan the rhythm guitars in the second part a bit closer to the center, they seem a bit too distant and there's like an empty space in the middle... unless that's on purpose, for vocals
A couple of my riffs: https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1516374