This is well good man. I dig your guitar tone it sounds ace, at least it did on its own in the intro. However the drums kinda drown it out and also it kinda makes the whole thing seem a little empty with no bass.

The drums need more high end, turn up the cymbals, I also think the guitar could do with a little more treble too tbh. Yeah you need to work on the kick, it's too boomy and a little too overpowering when there's double kick stuff going on.

Overall it's a pretty good mix, add some bass and work on the things I mentioned and I think this could sound pretty sweet and heavy as fuck! Keep it up bro

Thanks for checking out my track too!