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Quote by Devil_Duck
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This is a really rough recording of a new song I wrote a few days ago. I know my singing's not great and I stumble over my words a few times, but I think it makes for a pretty good song. Crit4crit and all that.

It's a really nice song, especially the guitar part. The vocal melody is nice enough, like you said your vocals could use a little practice but it's nothing that can't be worked on. I especially liked the mid section, think it was at about 1:20, thought I heard a cheeky dominant chord that worked really well
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