#1
Alright people,

This song is actually my friends, he just asked me to lay some of it down for him. the thing is, I've never mixed vocals before, so while this song is really in it's infancy I'd just like to ask your opinions on how it's going so far!

So I'm looking for:
General opinions on song, positives/negatives, constructive criticism.
The mix.
The lyrics.
The vocals.

C4C is welcome, just drop me a link!

http://profile.ultimate-guitar.com/This_Kidd/music/all/play1084035
Fender 60th Anniversary Standard Strat,
Epiphone Les Paul ES,
Line6 Flextone III,
Laney VC15,
Some pedals,
Some recording gear.
#3
nice overall vibe to it, the levels are spot on and the song is evolving and keeping me listening.
my only sticking point is the thin sound, I know I ain't one to judge(song7 ain't perfect)
but i feel it could have a slightly warmer sound to it...imo.
loved the ambience.=)