Can you guys give this a listen for me and tell what you think?
It's my first track since I started making music and obviously I've gotten better but I would like some feedback and figured this could be a good place to get some.

So, take a listen Please

Listened to Kraftwerk all day.
sometimes I see us in a cymbal splash or in the sound of a car crash
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Oh shit yeah. Forgot I was on ultimate-guitar :P I'm gonna get torn to shreds in the flame war :/ lmao

No, it doesn't belong in the Pit is what he's saying. Try Original Recordings or PYB.
There's no such thing; there never was. Where I am going you cannot follow me now.
There's also an extensive Electronic Thread here if you prefer proper feedback rather than people writing "Sounds cool brah" then asking for C4C.
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