#1
This is all just the raw files and some lining up and stuff, nothing major.
Still gotta Mix & Master, But maybe you guys will find something we don't find!

On top of just recording quality and stuff, what do you think of the song in general? Thanks so much if you take the time to check this out <3

http://soundcloud.com/ahrenleepier-gray/01-track-01/s-YgKor

Note: The tones of the guitars are being changed, I feel like the mids need to be scooped and bass should be a little more 'twangy'.


edit: HERE IS THE FINALIZED VERSION http://soundcloud.com/ahrenleepier-gray/captive-killing-the-messenger
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Last edited by ShiftedSoul at Feb 13, 2012,
#4
Well the kick sounds absolutely atrocious.
I actually like the mix, and I don't think you should lower the mids at all.

Solid song writing!
#6
I'm also looking for criticism on song structure and vocals as well. Let me know,
thanks for those of you who commented already!
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#7
I'll also post up the finalized version when its done too
C4C!
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#8
I'm writing while listening.
Love the driving beat. Cool riff! The mix is great, too. Don't scoop the mids because the tone sounds thick and powerful just how it is. Killer vocals! ...Even though I don't understand much of it. I like the part @0:57.
C4C https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?p=29109010
#9
Thanks for the criticism Silver, I'll check your link out now!
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#10
I'm digging the guitar tone. Like everyone else said, do NOT scoop the mids. I'd bring the bass up a bit more and I think you should re-record the drums because the kick here just doesn't have any balls. The solo is well done. The vocalist is pretty good. All in all, solid stuff, man! The only thing I'd really change would be the drums. They just need to sound more 3-dimensional if you know what I mean
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Quote by ARom22
I'm digging the guitar tone. Like everyone else said, do NOT scoop the mids. I'd bring the bass up a bit more and I think you should re-record the drums because the kick here just doesn't have any balls. The solo is well done. The vocalist is pretty good. All in all, solid stuff, man! The only thing I'd really change would be the drums. They just need to sound more 3-dimensional if you know what I mean


Thanks for the comment man
We fixed everything up, go listen to it again and let me know if you like the finished version We DID end up just bringing up the bass of the guitars tone though :P
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