Beautiful. Great playing and the melodies are fantastic. The rhythmic/percussive element works perfectly with it too
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'Tis a very, very decent first song. Congrats
The melodies are solid, and the different sections break up the song nicely. Love the rhythmic work as well. The sections of the song without it created nice contrast within the song.
The only thing I wasn't keen on was the reverb (I think) on the guitar. To me it sounded too distant and echoey.
Good work overall.

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