#1
Just a finished song, I don't know if I should post the link here but here are the lyrics :P

Verse 1:

Can you hear the wind sing?

Can you hear it playing that song we played?

Many years have past

Since the last time

That hymn filled my mind

You made my heart sing, a song so true


Oh, I just can't explain it
The music just makes the chaos
fade to black

Verse 2:

I remember my drums

moved to your rhythm

Your guitar
following my tempo as our notes intertwined

Such a symphony as beautiful as you

Bridge:

Still I remember

that song we played together

(Solo)


Chorus:

I remember that song we played

That beautiful sound, as sweet as your name

In my darkest times I think of you

Your rhythm and chords ring true


(Solo)


Verse 3:

Though the time we spent together

Was just a short while

A short memory, that last for an eternity
in my soul

Coda:

Feeling so sad that I lost you

To the dissonance of life

I know I was the one who hit the wrong note

I only wish to hear your guitar sing again

The only thing left are these weeping strings


Bridge:

Still I remember
that song we played together


Chorus:

I remember that song we played

That beautiful sound, as sweet as your name

In my darkest times I think of you

Your rhythm and chords ring true

I remember that song we played

your beautiful face as sweet as your name

Your rhythm and chords filled the air

My soothing remedy

Outro:

I remember that song we played

May the music we shared

Relieve my tears,

Remove my fears

I still loved that song we played


Just like I loved you

Melody
#2
I'd like to hear the name Melody at the beginning of the song, then the music references wouldn't bother me as much.
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#3
Oh. Oh well it's just a sappy love song anyway :P. Thought it looked better if I didn't overuse her name. But that's a nice idea though thanks dude
Last edited by gothblade at Feb 11, 2012,