It's called Cowboys and sounds like Cowboys From Hell...you cheeky thing you
YEah its good man. You should try movin your fingers somewhere unexpected/ random and see what comes out. I do that and get new licks sometimes that will change my whole style. Im not a heavy metal player though. See for yourself if you want, can you crit?http://profile.ultimate-guitar.com/Dhclark92/
Yeah sounds good. Defiantly try to find some intresting/obscure intervals or licks, Just to make it sound a bit more intresting. Very sounds great, good job!