#1
Newest song I've made, first one in a while. First 15 bars sound nice and all but I'm not sure if they fit too well with the rest of the song, but yeah. Tell me what you think and whatnot and I'll critic back. Listen to with headphones and RSE. Any suggestions would be cool.
Attachments:
Yeah... Yeah.gp5
Yeah... Yeah.gp4
#2
Sorry this critque is late, I hadn't checked the thread for my song for a while.

As a whole, I quite liked the piece. It sounded almost like something Explosions in the Sky might write. It sounds a little muddy at the start, but quite often that's just how GP or MIDI sounds with that kind of stuff, that probably isn't a problem with your composition. Fantastic relaxed feel over the whole track, which is a nice change to a lot of the <insert long-winded metal sub genre here> music that gets uploaded on this forum.
I deeply regret the 6661 in my username. Siiiigh. Damn you, 14 year old me, you edgy little bastard.