#1
Put an Amen on it, Brother

Look left,
Look right,
what a glorious sight.

Brothers, Sisters.

We are gathered here to celebrate
our (perservering) faith.
Isn't it exciting ?
Last time I checked, it
was all the same so,
whats changed brother ?
A new feast day for the aunt
of Mary Mother.
Another conspiracy about
Illicit (evil) Lovers.
Did Mary conceive him
underneath her covers.
Did Judas dig him out
with his bucket and his shovel.
Did he really walk on water.
Did he turn water into Wine.
Did he heal poor old lazarus,
Did he make those lepers fine.

Did jesus ever sin.
Just a little.
We're all sinners, you see.
And all includes jesus,
doesn't it.
If jesus was alive today,
do you think he'd have an iPhone.
Would he listen to Black Metal.
Would he have a fake tan.

I think he would.
Put an Amen on it, Brother.
#2
Haha thanks, I needed a laugh.
“Act the way you'd like to be and soon you'll be the way you act.” - Leonard Cohen


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#3
*Below crit based on me assuming this is a poem, not lyrics*

Put an Amen on it, Brother

Look left,
Look right,
what a glorious sight.

Brothers, Sisters.

Not the most intriguing if you were aiming for such a start. But I don't think that's it's job, and given the content of the next stanza it's a fairly solid intro.

We are gathered here to celebrate
our (perservering) faith.
Isn't it exciting ?
Last time I checked, it
was all the same so,
whats changed brother ?
A new feast day for the aunt
of Mary Mother.
Another conspiracy about
Illicit (evil) Lovers.
Did Mary conceive him
underneath her covers.
Did Judas dig him out
with his bucket and his shovel.
Did he really walk on water.
Did he turn water into Wine.
Did he heal poor old lazarus, The flow up to here was gorgeous, I particularly liked the use of brackets, line breaks are fine.
Did he make those lepers fine. This line needs editing in my opinion. Perhaps just with a simple 'And' to start.

Did jesus ever sin.
Just a little.
We're all sinners, you see.
And all includes jesus,
doesn't it.
If jesus was alive today,
do you think he'd have an iPhone.
Would he listen to Black Metal.
Would he have a fake tan.
For me, this whole stanza is what lets the piece down. It reads too much like a rant and the flow feels clumsy. The following stanza was almost perfect but this one doesn't match up.

I think he would.
Put an Amen on it, Brother. Fine to end the piece, and the repetition works well here. I just wish you improved the above to lift the piece as a whole. But overall, big potential and a very enjoyable read. If you see me post something anytime, a quick comment would be appreciated. Cheers.