#1
delight in textures -
ruffled flowers, the hair on your skin,
flowing fabrics, charcoal -
abstractions when the world stops making sense,
when days are short and winds are high
and the sadness in my eyes is blurred by the twilight.
Quote by Arthur Curry
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#2
Such pretty sounds here, with all the alliteration and subtle internal rhyme. There's something to be said for brevity, and you've said a lot here in only a few words. Of course, I'm just telling you things you already know or else you wouldn't have done them. Happy February 13th.
Today I feel electric grey
I hope tomorrow, neon black
#3
What Ganoosh said, basically. Tiny criticisms:

1. I don't really like "twilight" (horrible tv series association). Maybe use afterlight/afterglow/sundown or something.
2. Change "high" to "tall"? That would make more sense (in my mind) and has a bonus affect of being opposite of "short".
#4
lol aaron. you always have a way of ending you thoughts in a very cautious yet honest manner.

thanks for the suggestions and comments, guys. link me to any pieces you'd like a word on
Quote by Arthur Curry
it's official, vintage x metal is the saving grace of this board and/or the antichrist




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theguitarist
minterman22
tateandlyle
& alaskan_ninja

#5
Good stuff indeed.
マリ「しあわっせはーあるいってこないだーからあるいってゆっくんだねーん 
いっちにっちいっぽみーかでさんぽ
 さーんぽすすんでにっほさっがるー 
じーんせいはっわんつー!ぱんち・・・


"Success is as dangerous as failure. Hope is as hollow as fear." - from Tao Te Ching

#6
They'll usually help in this sort of thing. Probably though, the embassy is waiting on the petition. You can also contact your congressman and ask for his assistance as well.
#7
^what this guy said.

i thought it was great. i really enjoyed this for what it is, and nothing more. you had another short piece a while ago that i enjoyed as well. when and if the time comes that you choose to truly expand on these neat thoughts that you have, i know that it will be magnificent.
here, My Dear, here it is