#1
http://soundcloud.com/blackskyparadise/the-prisoner-wip2

My friend wrote the lyrics and does the vocals. I believe it's a song about alcohol abuse.
This is the first take of the vocals and we are going to re-record them when we get the chance.

Still a work in progress. Any feedback would be welcome to help me finish making the track: comments, suggestions, criticisms, praise or insults lol
Last edited by NeptuneUK at Feb 14, 2012,
#3
cool contrast between the sort of mellow music and aguished vocals - i do think the vocals could do with a bit of layering/beefing up on the "you know nothing" parts but otherwise nicely done on the mix and music

check out this - also work in progress and i think the mix needs a lot of tweaking and a few retakes - any advice appreciated

https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1519966