This is my first attempt at transcribing a song, and I would like somebody else's opinion on whether or not it sounds accurate.

The song is called Marilyn, My Bitterness by the Cruxshadows; you can listen to it here:

My tablature is contained in a Guitar Pro 5 file, which can be downloaded from this website. I have completed the percussion track up to the chorus, and the rhythm guitar up to the first verse.

Thanks to anybody who shares their thoughts!