#1
Check out my one man band, man. Share it with your friends if you want.

Criticism is much appreciated!
I'll check out some groups too, if you ask.

Shiny Moonchildren
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#2
*shameless bump*
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#4
Thanks a bunch, man!
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#5
"we grew up fast"

it was better than most stuff people post here. I can tell you listen to nmh a lot though. it shows through in your work which isn't really a good thing even if you don't value originality. get more influences

the xylophone was entirely too loud. It def. would have added some atmosphere if it wasn't busy defeating the rest of the sound.

I liked the vocals and the vocal effects a lot.

you should make your guitar tracks more present and powerful. They should be leading the song more. Maybe just put more thought in to all of your track levels.

it seemed like a somewhat honest piece of music which is always a big plus.

good influences=good writing
#6
Thanks man, I appreciate the feedback. I'll work on developing the points you mentioned, because those are very valid and legitimate points. Thanks, again!
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I like kittens
SHUT UP NO ONE ASKED YOU!


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