#7
Nice man, solid pop song, and I love pomplamoose! Vocal melody is painfully catchy, probably gonna be in my head for ages now :P
My only criticism is your presence in front of the camera, some of the shots you look forced and unnatural, and that took my concentration off the music and onto you. I haven't got a whole lot of experience in front of cameras, but I think if you weren't as concious of the camera and acted like it wasn't even there you may look more natural in the video. But like i said, I've got no idea what i'm talking about and thats got nothing to do with the actual song.
So nice work!

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#8
Thanks for your advice. Yes, I get exactly what you mean too and I agree with you. It's my first videosong, so I wasn't really sure what to do with it.