Here is another tune I wrote and recorded alone one stony night. Didn't write it about any girl in particular, but after recording realized it was about a girl I dated in high school. Go figure.

Hope you like it!

Here is the other song I posted a couple weeks back.
Why has no one commented on this? I really loved the lead guitar and rhytm. It reminds me of old arctic monkeys. My crit would be that the vocal should be panned centered and perhaps less distorted because it's hard to understand the words. If you add drums and edit the vocals this will be sooooo good.

C4c? https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1521087

I'm not really fond of this, sorry. The guitar just sounds a bit bland and almost out of time and most definately out of tune.
I will, however, commend the vocals. I don't know why, but despite my views on the guitar I do find them quite enjoyable. I think if you re-recorded the guitar part you could make this into a very good track.

I don't want to come across as a troll or an asshole, I just feel I have to tell the truth. I can hear how the guitar is supposed to sound, but it doesn't quite cut it as it is.
Please re-record the guitars carefully, and you will have a very nice song going.

Good luck, and I hope to hear some more of your material in the future!

- Neptune


Oh yeah, if you want, you can critisize my latest track down to size : https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1521060
Last edited by NeptuneUK at Feb 20, 2012,
It sounds like there could be something good under all that noise, could you please re-record this with intune guitars and a metronome. I'm not a huge fan of the distorted vocals, they get lost amongst the guitars and it just becomes confusing. And work the levels so that the backing vocals don't drown everything out, like at 1:02.
Give it another shot dude, the guitar lines and vocals that I can understand sound pretty interesting, I want to hear more!

If you've got a sec could you give my stuff a listen?
Last edited by cammo_1234 at Feb 20, 2012,