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Twisted is somewhat of an idea a hardcore-ish. (Don't want to hear how I have genres mixed up. This writing I feel has heavy influence from atreyu, killswitch, and A7X. C4C.
I am putting together tracks of new stuff, so all constructive criticism helps!

Twisted


Bleeding, it rushes from my chest
Splash upon the floor
From the hole they bore
I can't see why this is happening
Denied the right
To live my life

This feeling inside
(The urge to rip and tear and break)
Flesh and bone
(All this shit I can no longer take)
Will you (...still look me in the eye)
(When the old me...)
Breaks and dies

Bandages turn black from blood as
A dangerous lust enters my skull
Like the fist I've thrown through this wall
Fresh blood stains broken hands
open wounds erase old scars
Streams of crimson
Paint this home

This feeling inside
(The urge to rip and tear and break)
Flesh and bone
(All this shit I can no longer take)
Will you (...still look me in the eye)
(When the old me...)
Breaks and dies

Soon they will see that it's too late
It's been instilled into me This hate
i will make them pay
This ends tonight

LEAD

This feeling inside
(The urge to rip and tear and break)
Flesh and bone
(All this shit I can no longer take)
Will you (...still look me in the eye)
(When the old me...)
Breaks and dies

This feeling inside
(The urge to rip and tear and break)
Flesh and bone
(All this shit I can no longer take)
Will you (...still look me in the eye)
(When the old me...)
Breaks and dies
Last edited by lmenagewcis at Feb 27, 2012,