Playing is mostly good, but the guitar tone is so hissy and saturated that it's terribly muffled. That pinch harmonic toward the beginning is not squealy enough. It'd be cool to have a "bigger" drum sound, and the bass a little higher up in the mix, with more bass frequencies all around. (Guitarist saying this). The bridge naturall harmonics need work. Other than those issues, it's a nice cover!
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