RAJIV ROCKZ
Registered User
Join date: Sep 2009
739 IQ
#1
A simple song i wrote sometimes
back! Suggestions are welcome! And please give a title if more appropriate than this to the song!

Here it goes-
When I was fallen, you taught me to fly
You stood by my side, i learnt to kiss the sky
but you just ended it all with a simple goodbye
I can't believe those three words were a lie.

So much to say, hundred thoughts to share,
but you walked away like you didnt even care!
You made me wear this blanket of despair!
the pain that you caused is now beyond repair.

I could just wonder what it would be like,
if you walk back into my life,
but its now only a dream to me,
cause i know with u i cud never be...
Life is now a rainbow in shades of gray,
Nights pass with company of lonliness and ashtray,
Bottle's bottom has got no answer to say,
And Getting you back seems light years away!

i could just wonder what it would be like,
if you walk back into my life,
but its now only a dream to me,
coz i know with u i could never be...

i could just wonder what it would be like,
if you walk back into my life,
but its now only a dream to me,
coz i knw with u i could never be...
Never be...
NickGiovanni
Needs Money; Will Pay
Join date: Jan 2010
561 IQ
#2
Pretty cool how you managed to keep the couplets throughout, I've found that rhymed lyrics are always easier remembered.

Not bad dude, Sounds like a Grunge song or something Alt. Rock
How many guitar players does it take to change a light bulb?

Twelve. One to change the bulb and eleven to say they could do it better.