#2
Ah, electronic!!! The beginning was quite Camo & Crooked, really dig that. The transition is a bit too abrupt cause you seem to jump from one thing to the other, maybe try to make them fade into one another. The second transition was perfect!

The last (high pitch) melody was awesome, really like the feel to it. I also dig the second funky melody.

Really good stuff!

Could you crit mine? http://www.ultimate-guitar.com/foru...57#post29197157
#3
Quote by thedefrockednun
Ah, electronic!!! The beginning was quite Camo & Crooked, really dig that. The transition is a bit too abrupt cause you seem to jump from one thing to the other, maybe try to make them fade into one another. The second transition was perfect!

The last (high pitch) melody was awesome, really like the feel to it. I also dig the second funky melody.

Really good stuff!

Could you crit mine? http://www.ultimate-guitar.com/foru...57#post29197157


Thanks, man!! Glad you liked it!

I can't crit your stuff cause the link is broken
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#4
I really dig the drum beat in the first part the song. The first transition was kind of unexpected for me, not sure if i liked the timing of it, it sounded very cluttered. The Second transtition was smooth, and i liked how you added some high string, and key parts in. Nice touch to change the sound. That drum track is great though

C4C? https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1522123