#1
I'm working on an EP that I eventually want to get recorded, so I thought that before I got too far ahead of my self I'd post the first finished track for your comments.

As always I'll try and C4C if I can.
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Condemned Illusion.gp5
Condemned Illusion.mid
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#2
It's not bad, but I do think the downward progression at the beginning is somewhat odd. Maybe try experimenting with something a little less...depressing sounding? Verse 1 sounds nice, but a bit too repetitive. Try changing up the ringing notes and also the chord patterns that you use. Chug Chug Stuff ( gotta love that name) has a weird chord progression as well and the 5-5-8 chord is way out of key. Also, same thing as verse 1. The lead pattern is repetitive and so is the chord pattern. Looking onwards...I think you need to work on variation within each riff. Too much repetition. Overall, it's not bad. It has potential, but you need to work on the smaller details.

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#3
Done and done, gonna try and add some more lead parts in here and there to try and break up repetition some what.
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