I like the guitar melody, it's simple and catchy. The lyrics were clever and the way you sing them reminds me a little of Roger Waters (that's a good thing btw). Although in the first half your voice sounds kinda strained, have you tried playing it in a tad higher key? I liked the end with the vocal improv.

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Nice guitar work dude, cool little melodies there. I did find it kinda hard to hear (could be that my housemate's band is practicing in the next room) but your vocals sounded like they had potential to be cool. I couldn't really make out the melody until you took it up the octave. And nice whistling, I've got respect for anyone who can whistle a melody! Lyrics were cool too! Get yourself some recording gear, a webcam will never do you justice.

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