#2
On 'Leaving'. The chord changes are repetitive but fit perfectly for exploring the singing melody and lyrics. As it's a demo, it is a little rough in sound, the only suggestion I have is that the drums are quite sharp sounding. Thinking a more rounded, softer sound would help them fit into the mix a bit better. Like the staccato/jumpy sound of the drumming.

Great singing and guitar playing. A lot of heart and feeling
#3
Quote by Furegious
On 'Leaving'. The chord changes are repetitive but fit perfectly for exploring the singing melody and lyrics. As it's a demo, it is a little rough in sound, the only suggestion I have is that the drums are quite sharp sounding. Thinking a more rounded, softer sound would help them fit into the mix a bit better. Like the staccato/jumpy sound of the drumming.

Great singing and guitar playing. A lot of heart and feeling

Thank you very much my brother! the song did come out a bit rough but we are working on new and better stuff as of now! Thank you again my friend for the feedback