Good stuff, the guitar riffs have a good groove to them though they're nice and heavy and it all flows well. I felt the second half was the better part as both leads fitted in well and were nicely played. From a recording perspective the guitars sounded great, very chunky and overall mixed well, especially with the leads layered on top.

The main issue for me was the snare and bass drum, they both lack any punch. The snare sample sounds like a rimshot so I'd make sure you chart the drums using the proper snare sample if that is the problem.
Overall, good stuff!

Could you crit mine please?
Epiphone Les Paul Standard
Blackstar HT-20 Studio Combo
Digitech RP500, Dunlop Crybaby, Korg Pitchblack

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