#1
Guys, would you give this a listen? its only 3 minutes... and I need some thoughts on the guitars...
Its here, on my profile, its called "404"
404
C4C of course!

My songs
My Band songs

Gear:
Vox PathFinder R15
Epiphone G-400
Accord Strato
Acoustic Guitar
POD HD 300
Boss MT2
Boss CH1
Boss DS1
Tascam US-122 MKII
AT 2020 mic
#2
It was pretty good & well played, but I don't think it worked too well as an instrumental. Just some fairly standard rhythmic patterns and some blues-rocky power chords. It either needs something soloing all the way through, or vocals. I guess the end is unfinished but I'd fix that too. Oh, and get a bass.
Last edited by Ziphoblat at Mar 2, 2012,
#3
Hey man, thanks for the crit!
Its only a rythm guitar, i know, further elements will be added soon.

My songs
My Band songs

Gear:
Vox PathFinder R15
Epiphone G-400
Accord Strato
Acoustic Guitar
POD HD 300
Boss MT2
Boss CH1
Boss DS1
Tascam US-122 MKII
AT 2020 mic
#4
nice third riff, the only thing i would say goes against the track it is very forward...=S maybe not the right word...erm...straight. I think if you sped it up a touch and trew a bass in there it would sound pretty. I can't fault the playing it's tight enough the choice of chords and notes we're spot on.

crit here if you like. =)https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1523739
#5
I like the guitar playing, but the tone doesn't sit with me too well. Just preference, I guess. A bit too crunchy for my taste. Are the drums meant to be panned to the left the entire track? It's distracting. Make them dead center. I'd also add some reverb to the drums too. Give it a heavier atmosphere. Good track. I liked it.

C4C?
https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1523148